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presents:
A Harbor & murky dark comedy Musical cartoon starring:
`s Brimy maidem of the big blue seas Salty Dog Selby!!! And
`s trouble seeking Sailors Raw & Salty!For setting the mood while reading clink the link below and be provided by the wonderful tunes Used to set the "color" to the match! play them in the pages and sing along!
Mon gars by Klaus Doldinger performed by Rita Cadillac Pag 1, 2
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The legendary delta blues performer leadbelly cc rider
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A sea battle adventure cannot go whitout the royal navy traditional song! Tally ho!
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Dance whit this couple at the tunes of Ella Fitzgerald! whit `tain`t what you do ( It`s the way you do it) and see salty do da thing! Pag 14,15
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for the rest of the comic enjoy Miss Ella fitzgerald and chick webb in St. Louis Blues!
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I do want to express before any results or such that it makes me happy oh so happy!! To had gone so far and being match against this rocking lady! and thank you to everyone who comments and faves and just takes a pick on this work I appreciate your time.
as this is a Flash comic, you can turn the pages as you would a normal comic book
WARNING : This contains Violence and adult language
All characters portrayed in this comic, belong to their respective owners.
Enjoy
good luck to all in this 3nd round!
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Comments10
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Congrats on submitting a fully completed and fabulous comic!
I really appreciate you and other members of the OCT making their comics ongoing stories as their characters develop. It really makes it an interesting read as the reader wants to know where Raw & Salty will go next. I'm surprised to see ol' Raw showing some sentiment over the thought of losing Salty in those first pages. Nice to see some humanity being shown there.
Your details are really what grabbed me. From the details of the docks on the first page, to the accessories and little things in the tavern like poor Dandy Kasagi's LOST photo. (I especially like the swordfish!). Once again your knack for machinery and metal really shines as you used both the submarine AND Selby's ship. I really dig the page where all her turrets go off. Totally stellar! Not to mention poor Salty's instant infatuation. I was chuckling over his reactions to what he was peeping in those binoculars
It was definitely an whiz bam boom entry that you obviously worked hard on, do I doff my hat to you.
I'd say throughout my only complaint would have to be your dialogue. I'm guessing English isn't your first language as some of the spelling and jokes were off or didn't land to that humorous payoff. I found myself having to re-read some pages to try and understand what you were trying to have your characters say which took me out of the fast paced element of your events.
I really appreciate you and other members of the OCT making their comics ongoing stories as their characters develop. It really makes it an interesting read as the reader wants to know where Raw & Salty will go next. I'm surprised to see ol' Raw showing some sentiment over the thought of losing Salty in those first pages. Nice to see some humanity being shown there.
Your details are really what grabbed me. From the details of the docks on the first page, to the accessories and little things in the tavern like poor Dandy Kasagi's LOST photo. (I especially like the swordfish!). Once again your knack for machinery and metal really shines as you used both the submarine AND Selby's ship. I really dig the page where all her turrets go off. Totally stellar! Not to mention poor Salty's instant infatuation. I was chuckling over his reactions to what he was peeping in those binoculars
It was definitely an whiz bam boom entry that you obviously worked hard on, do I doff my hat to you.I'd say throughout my only complaint would have to be your dialogue. I'm guessing English isn't your first language as some of the spelling and jokes were off or didn't land to that humorous payoff. I found myself having to re-read some pages to try and understand what you were trying to have your characters say which took me out of the fast paced element of your events.